“The Bridge” Chapter 2

Here are the Prologue and Chapter 2 of my novel, The Bridge.

Sorry that the Prologue is coming now. When I finally opened up the story files after the disk had sat for several years in storage, I forgot to open that file for a long time. So the most recent read-and-edit was done without it, and I still forget it sometimes.

That is going to be one of my questions as the story goes along. Do I need the Prologue at all? It adds extra meaning to what goes on in Chapter 1, but it may not need to be there. What do you think?

Feel free to leave any comments in this post if you want to. Let me know what you think.

For those who commented on all those adverbs attached to speaking verbs, that won’t be amended in this chapter, but it should be better in every chapter after this one, as they go through a fresh edit before each posting.

Alrighty! Have a read, and I hope you enjoy.

(Blog post and Comments for Chapter 1)

(Complete Chapter List)

    2 comments

    1. Carol R. says:

      Hi Phyl, Chapter 2 was good also. Will you be putting any more chapters on this site?

      (dont’ know if you saw my keeping in touch e-mail yet of a couple of weeks ago) Sorry to insert that here.

      Have you sent these chapters of The Bridge of to anyone yet? It will be a great book if you can get it published.

    2. Carol R. says:

      Again, enjoyed the chapter. Will you be putting anymore chapters on this page?

      Have you submitted these to anyone yet?

      (not related – sent a keep in touch e-mail couple of wks ago)

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